Friday, July 5, 2013

like sand

like sand through fingers
i fell from you, not sure yet
if i meant to fall

07.2013

[written in response to the prompt "Sand" over at Haiku Heights. xo]

6 comments:

mindlovemisery said...

Wonderful, sad and yet romantic still

Mirage said...

Poignant

McGuffy Ann said...

Reflective and thoughtful.

winspiration.me said...

Oh dear this is a bit sad, but a beautiful haiku x

karinwiberg said...

I like that last line...

Dana Leah said...

unfortunately sad, yes, but it formed so beautifully around what i was feeling at the time. thank you all for your lovely comments, much appreciated. xo